Subject: Re: DRAFT: TPs for NYC labor rally tomorrow
From: Dan Stein <[email-masked]>
To: Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>
Cc: Nikki Budzinski <[email-masked]>, Speech Book <[email-masked]>, Rebecca Chalif <[email-masked]>, Lily Adams <[email-masked]>, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]>, Jennifer Palmieri <[email-masked]>, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, "Ann O'Leary" <[email-masked]>, Erin Stevens <[email-masked]>, Milia Fisher <[email-masked]>, Jason Chung <[email-masked]>
Date: Wed, 2 Mar 2016 12:46:51 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

The current plan is for this to be without a podium. We'll need to make
sure all the unions are on her ack card.

We'll send this draft to her.

On Wed, Mar 2, 2016 at 12:24 PM, Lauren Peterson <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> Updated with changes accepted here, and adding speechbook@ as we're
> guessing she needs this ASAP.
>
> Please note that this DOES have the Detroit line:
>
> This week, I’m heading to Detroit to talk about my plan to create jobs in
> the Motor City and all across our country.
>
> Thanks, all!
>
> On Wed, Mar 2, 2016 at 11:47 AM, Lauren Peterson <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Thanks to everyone for your edits. Updated here -- let me know how this
>> looks.
>>
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Mar 2, 2016 at 10:27 AM, Nikki Budzinski <
>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>
>>> And she says in the SEIU video receiving their endorsement that she
>>> stands with workers "Fighting for 15 and a union".  That was what we were
>>> referencing in her remarks.  Maybe that should be more clear?  But I
>>> wouldn't want to see us take out that line too.
>>>
>>> Sent from my iPhone
>>>
>>> On Mar 2, 2016, at 10:06 AM, Joel Benenson <[email-masked]> wrote:
>>>
>>> This reads like she’s for a $15 minimum wage and I think we have to
>>> choose our language more carefully.   Reporters will not cut us any slack
>>> on this.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> I also don’t like – “When unions are strong, America’ is strong” --- it
>>> is obviously the line she has always used on family, which is core to where
>>> her focus has been her whole life that we weaken it when it we start using
>>> it for other purposes.      ---- Why can’t we say:  I have always believed
>>> that when unions are strong, it lifts/strengthen all working Americans.
>>> --- we could then make the point that is was unions that led the fight for
>>> health care more than half a century ago; it was and still are unions
>>> leading the fight to raise the minimum wage, which we need to do and which
>>> will lift 35MM working Americans out of poverty.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On the seat at the table --- I would flip second and third sentence..
>>> her promise…. As long as you’re fighting for working families in America,
>>> I’ll be in the trenches fighting alongside you and when I’m in the White
>>> House, labor will always have a seat at the table (and your voices will
>>> always be heard. )
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> *From:* [email-masked] [
>>> mailto:[email-masked] <[email-masked]>]
>>> *On Behalf Of *Jennifer Palmieri
>>> *Sent:* Wednesday, March 02, 2016 9:50 AM
>>> *To:* Huma Abedin
>>> *Cc:* Lauren Peterson; Speech Drafts; Ann O'Leary; Nikki Budzinski;
>>> Erin Stevens; Milia Fisher
>>> *Subject:* Re: DRAFT: TPs for NYC labor rally tomorrow
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Defer to you NY folks on that point - but I would think she should name
>>> all the unions represented.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> Other thing I dont see here is a mention of heading to Michigan and how
>>> she will have more to say about creating jobs there.  She does not need to
>>> say the words herself - but we were going to use the occasion of this
>>> speech to tell the press that she would have a jobs speech on Friday in
>>> Detroit.
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>> On Wed, Mar 2, 2016 at 9:37 AM, Huma Abedin <[email-masked]>
>>> wrote:
>>>
>>> Are you sure we don't need to identify all the labor groups
>>> represented at the rally? I feel like we get in trouble when we don't
>>>
>>>
>>> > On Mar 2, 2016, at 1:48 AM, Lauren Peterson <
>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>> >
>>> > Thanks to all who have given input so far. Sending around these TPs
>>> for the NYC rally tomorrow -- will keep an eye out for edits overnight and
>>> in the morning.
>>> >
>>> > Thanks! Happy Super Tuesday, everyone!
>>> > <2016-03-02 NYC Labor Rally 1 am lp.docx>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>>
>>
>