Subject: Re: DRAFT: Marie Claire guns essay [edits by 4pm]
From: "De'Ara Balenger" <[email-masked]>
To: Amanda Renteria <[email-masked]>
Cc: Corey Ciorciari <[email-masked]>, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>, Lauren Peterson <[email-masked]>, Speech Drafts <[email-masked]>, Nick Merrill <[email-masked]>, LaDavia Drane <[email-masked]>
Date: Thu, 14 Jan 2016 15:51:06 -0500
List-Id: <speechdrafts.hillaryclinton.com>

This is great. My edits are attached. The only flag here is that Jordan
Davis was killed by a white man, so arguably - this crime was racially
motivated, which takes this outside the discussion of gun violence. Was
there another mother in the Chicago meeting where the shooting was NOT
racially motivated? If yes, we should use that story instead of Jordan
Davis.

Thanks!

On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 3:35 PM, Amanda Renteria <
[email-masked]> wrote:

> This is a great piece.
>
> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 3:33 PM, Corey Ciorciari <
> [email-masked]> wrote:
>
>> Love it. Edits attached.
>>
>> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 2:17 PM, Emily Aden <[email-masked]>
>> wrote:
>>
>>> Minor research edit in comments
>>>
>>> On Thu, Jan 14, 2016 at 1:46 PM, Lauren Peterson <
>>> [email-masked]> wrote:
>>>
>>>> Hey all --
>>>>
>>>> Marie Claire has partnered with Harvard on a study that looks at women
>>>> and guns -- their attitudes, their experiences, etc. They're publishing
>>>> their findings soon, and they've asked Hillary to contribute an essay on
>>>> the subject.
>>>>
>>>> Attached is a draft from me + Megan. This is all coming together pretty
>>>> quickly, so if everyone could send edits by 4pm, that would be great.
>>>>
>>>> De'Ara and LaDavia: This refers to her meeting with the mothers in
>>>> Chicago. Please confirm this is okay.
>>>>
>>>> Thanks!
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>>
>>>
>>
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